On the first panel I am finding the dialog flow a bit confusing. I thought Cleo said « I have one… » then Carmilla said « we need a plan » and then « That was close ». Just saying, I can’t be critical because I may have done that too.
Yeah it’s my major problem: dialogs are often misplaced and it’s a bit confusing. I should try to manga the space in the frames a bit better, but it’s not so easy.
Why be a decoy if someone else can be it for you ?
That’s the spirit!
Cleo’s expression in the middle is a masterpiece
I agree
Oh, « Sin tetas no hay BSG ».
On the first panel I am finding the dialog flow a bit confusing. I thought Cleo said « I have one… » then Carmilla said « we need a plan » and then « That was close ». Just saying, I can’t be critical because I may have done that too.
Yeah it’s my major problem: dialogs are often misplaced and it’s a bit confusing. I should try to manga the space in the frames a bit better, but it’s not so easy.
It’s no big deal, and I know you care to do it right. I know it is not easy, my dialogs end up covering art that they shouldn’t.
IMMAAH FIRIN MAH LAZOR!!!
The last panel is juicy…